So I was writing a reply to your reply further up, when I saw this. I recently read Aristotle's Poetics, and for stating the bleeding obvious a lot of the time, it really brought home how much we respond to structure to inform our overall feeling about a piece, and how it has become "creative" to subvert that structure. (And I don't mean your switching between two periods of time. There is a very clear structure here. I am speaking of stories that deliberately omit, mislead without resolution, etc etc.)
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But the interesting part to me was the necessity of dénouement (and screw Adaptation for ruining that word) to provide a satisfactory relief of tension for the audience. And I think the reason I find this story some completely pleasing is that you go beyond the usual end place a writer will end relative to the climax of the story.