Thank you! I struggled with how explicit to make the story, and finally decided to make the sex unambiguous but without a lot of anatomical detail. I figured that there would be a strange disconnect if I made it to the level of "what goes where"--their own reticence would not have been as believable. Thanks very much for reading and letting me know what you thought--and I was very happy to see that you posted a new story, too!
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Date: 2009-08-15 10:02 pm (UTC)